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The formatting is *huge*.
There's some really great ideas in *The City of Schwartzenbruin*. There's a few idea prompts which have potential, some good NPC concepts and ideas, two maps, and the writing is at least as good as most other decently-rated stuff on the market.
Unfortunately, the formatting makes the product suffer. ... It looks a little more like the formatting one might expect in a college paper.
The PDF is **double-spaced** (nearly) throughout.
(visible in the preview, as well.)
There's wide margins (0.8 to 1") and wide space between columns. A large (12pt) font, not intended at all for print. The paragraphs are justified, rather than aligned-left, ... all resulting in a layout that extends the pagecount of the PDF. It has exceptionally large headers, and even the indents and lines between parasgraphs are large.
The very end of the book ("Encounter Descriptions", pp.61-65) has decent formatting for some reason, by removing the double-s...
Rating: [2 of 5 Stars!] |
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The Good
This adventure offers an atmospheric and engaging adventure set in the haunted coastal village of Vikstead. The rich narrative and detailed settings, from the Silent Docks to the eerie Lighthouse, provide a captivating backdrop for players. The adventure's structure, broken down into clear and manageable scenes, ensures a smooth progression and helps Dungeon Masters keep the story engaging and organized. The inclusion of a compelling villain, Neris the Sea Hag, adds depth and intrigue, making the climactic confrontation both thrilling and memorable. Additionally, the adventure's flexibility allows it to be seamlessly integrated into any campaign setting, providing a versatile and enjoyable experience for both new and experienced players.
The Bad
While the adventure excels in atmosphere and narrative, the complexity of managing the various scenes and encounters may be challenging for new Dungeon Masters. The detailed descriptions and numerous NPCs require careful a...
Rating: [5 of 5 Stars!] |
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