The backstory is good, if completely at odds with the tone of the art. The challenge level is good. The add on map pack is a nice touch. New favorite Tier 1.

The rough bits:

• You can't copy anf paste much of anything from the PDF, making it an absolute bear to fully integrate into roll 20 handouts. It was a real pain converting everything.
• The map pack overlays parts of the original map halls with filler, so using them as overlays requires some editing.

Thank you, looking forward to the rest of the story.