I ran this adventure tonight with my players, it went amazingly well. All of my players love this dragon, I made his personality really fun, they loved that he wanted help getting back his pipe and sacred weed. I feel like my players loving the dragon will be helpful later on in the campaign.
My players also really enjoyed the shrine area with the water basin, that was fun. This adventure provided a good amount of content for my players. For context, we had about a 7 hour session and all they did was go to Everlund (this took about an hour) and this adventure. So, I'm very happy with the amount of content that was in this adventure.
I did not notice any grammar flaws in the adventure, it was all pretty easy to understand. The locations of the different locations were helpful, but I could have used more help in the description of the dragon lairs.
Overall, this was amazizng. Absolutely loved it.
My players said this was their favorite session of SKT so far.
[5 of 5 Stars!]