I ran this a few weeks ago as part of my scheduling.
Firstly on the whole I didnt notice many spelling issues or the like compared to some DDAL stuff. Good work here.
The theme setup in this story is great and what makes it even better is that there is an Appendix on Elmwood itself down to alignment status and key people. Thats just above and beyond.
The monsters used are thematically appropriate. The Corpse Flowers encounter though is an ... issue. On average strength there are a LOT of monsters on the board at one time. A lot . It can make combat rounds... difficult. Be prepared for this.
Good use of call outs to Curse of the Azure Bonds. The NPC Sage is certainly one :), but sadly his time is short and I think he could of easily been a good npc to carry through the series.
All in all a good start to a story with the 2nd scenario perhaps a little weaker than the first with the last scenario being the best of the series.
[3 of 5 Stars!]