This adventure is fantastic, I loved almost every minute of planning and running it. The NPCs are interesting, the plot is fantastic, throwing its twist at the player after giving them two red herrings to deal with ahead of time. I cant wait to run it again.
I will give two criticisms, and they are both for the same thing. Maps.
The dungeon's map is fantastic, but if Pisca gets the crown and you have to fight her outside of the dungeon, you are SOL for a map.
The only real improvement I could see for this adventure is a map of the village that can be used for players for both exploration and a final encounter.
[5 of 5 Stars!]