Balance Disturbed is the start of an epic adventure coming to us from Dan Harlan. I enjoyed reading this adventure as it really encapsulates the essence of the DMs Guild to me, where everyone can share their content and bring their stories to life for others to enjoy.

Quality - Presentation and readability of the product. (Possible Points: 14/20) Utility - How easy the product can be used for other settings or mined for ideas. (Possible Points: 7/10) Innovation - How original is the content? (Possible Points: 4/10) Price - The overall value to price ratio according to me. (Possible Points: 10/10)

Balance Disturbed is the exciting beginning to a what I am sure will be an epic campaign arc. Dan sweeps you along without too much in the way of pleasantries, but the adventure is solid and makes for an easy pick-up. The PDF suffers from some editing where text boxes are split on two different pages and the legal terms start immediately after the end of the actual content. Nothing super major, but the adventure could use a little beautifying, but I am also a little bit of a graphics snob since I work in marketing in my day job! (Don't hurt me Dan!) All that being said, the adventure is easily portable to a different campaign world and for the price of just $1.00 you can have a great adventure with the potential for more epic stories connected to it. I can dig that!

Total QUIP Score: 35/50 - Solid adventure with the potential for more. No imagination in your brain? Buy your imagination from Dan, he's got you covered.

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