Played this as a Christmas one shot for my friends. I had them do a secret santa to make each others characters which was a big hit!
The theme of the monsters, the items and saving Chritsmas was very fun. BJ Keeton is really good at making the monsters and items. But I found that this adventure lacked in certain ways. This one shot is very combat heavy, I would have appreciated some puzzles or riddles. So I recommend doing what I did and change some of the doors to locked through Christmas riddles.
SPOILERS
The story line did not make much sense, the reveal of who is doing this and why only comes up through the rambling of some monsters during the story, the design of a key(?) or at the end once the day is saved through Santa's monologue. I wish there was greater understanding in motivations. To give more context I ended up changing the jack and the box room to a library with the jack and the box so that I could include family record books to explain who the villan was and her relation to Santa. The final fight had fun elements but the way that death of the "villan" seems to be the solution makes for a pretty dark ending to a Christmas story. I know non lethal damage is a thing but my players forgot and its hard to describe an swinging for 15 damage to someone with 2 hp left in a way that would not be gruesome. In the end my players had killed her and Christmas was "saved" but it felt awkward. Since the whole, she gave up her birthright by being an independed woman who wanted to explore the world, gives a bad message and made my players question if Santa was actually the bad guy all along. I think if it was not his sister but instead an evil monster the story would have more to stand on and the players could feel better of what they had done.
Final thing... Mrs. Claus is given a first name? I thought maybe it was going to be relevant to the story or from history. But it seems as though that is not the case so I do not understand why it was put in there. Maybe I missed something.
Edit based on reply
I had a hunch that Ms Claus had been given a name to make her a more fleshed out character. I think it is great to give woman a personality beyond the notion of them being a wife. I hope you can find a way ingrain that into the story, possibly through dialog, motivations and other relations.
I am looking foward to the updates you will make, I will try to run this again next year!
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