This was my first experience DMing, my husband and I play two characters each, he always DMs, I wanted to give him a break.
What I loved was how user friendly the whole thing was, nicely laid out, everything you needed, stats etc. right there, even reminders of rulings in some cases. It was all made beautifully easy.
I had to change the genders of a lot of the PCs - 80% of them were male (not including the accused), and the remaining 20% were wives of other PCs, that was a bit depressing, especially as this meant that the only independant women were the ones who might be evil - its a trope I'd hoped I'd seen the end of - to the same theme, I altered the villain's motive, she was far too intelligent for upkeeping her beauty to be her raison d'etre. I also added some disabilities and LGBTQ+ diversity for believability and my own joy.
My husband, being him, had no interest in hearsay, so we didn't talk to most of the PCs anyway, and I ended up creating a few to deliver the information he needed in another way. One thing that bugged me and I changed on the paper is this - NO ONE puts the catch to a door, even if it's a hidden one, two stories up, who's running up two flights of stairs to pull a catch then back down again? Doesn't happen.
He thoroughly enjoyed the final boss battle but the other two not so much - he felt railroaded into and then cheated into being surprised by the monster (this may be my inexperience, but he insists it's not), and after his main character took 11hp to the crown jewels was very upset he couldn't kill the thugs! We were a level up from the recommended level and I doubled the bad guy's hit points, by the way.
For £2.50 it's definitely worth it. Thank you for the hard work you put in, but may be try to avoid the tropes in future? I think you hit every one.
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