Lots of typos (e.g., Gitzla's Lukky Coin) and poorly edited ("you receive a bonus to all Charisma (Persuasion) checks...", but the bonus is never defined). Items are, for the most part, unbalanced and/or overpowered. There's some good flavor, and a few simple tweaks should take care of balance (adding attunement, limited uses per day, streamlining items with multiple powers, etc.). It's worth $2 if you're looking for ideas for DotMM-themed treasure (something the adventure is sorely lacking) and are willing to put in a little work to make it presentable.
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