Excellent and charming adventure, especially as it avaliable for free.
The tone, characters and setting are great.
There are a few editing errors:
-The CR of Mr Grin is quoted as 5 in the text and 7 in the statblock.
-The text is inconsistent on whether the statues are stone or coal.
Though these can be forgiven in a free product.
As other reviews have said, the adventure is very open ended with no set series of events which means you need to be quite thorough in your preparation. Those may mean more work it does make the adventure very enjoyable and interesting for both the players and the DM.
As advertised this adventure is very much not combat focused and I would not reccommend fixing by including the random encounters the adventure provides. I would personally reccommend picking one and try to make it more significant to your players.
I also increased the combat by planning for the potential revenge plot to end with a battle with a demon representing small minded racism.
Overall an amazing and interesting adventure but one which may require lots of preparation and tailoring.
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