The content and thought put into this bundle was superbly done. The editing and execution of maps was very poorly done. The website for the FishPirate is still operating and they will reply promptly to any questions.

The storylines weave nicely into an extended Lost Mine campaign which my players really enjoyed. The Armies Coliding took some getting used to by the players and DM but, evolved into a three sessions of a fun exercise in strategy and trying to outwit each other.

I would recommend picking this bundle up for nothing more than the additional background and color for NPC's introduced in Lost Mine of Phandelver and the new ones designed to go with the After Lost Mine stories. This will really help you with the role playing of the NPC in the Phandalin Village even if you don't run any of the modules in the bundle.

a very good bundle.

PRO: the new NPCs are delightful. each one has a great backstory, personality, and really helps flesh out Phandalin. The adventure and use of unearthed arcana are excellently crafted.

CON: I do wish their were more formalized descriptions of NPCs. like "[NAME/RACE/SEX]". Charla, Amos, Elizabeth, and others have no defined race AND don't immediately identify the sex of the NPC. only after reading a paragraph or two do you find pronouns like "he" or "she".

my only other complaint is that the maps are nearly iillegiblemesses. every single map needs to be redone properly. even a scanned doodle on graph paper would be better.

various typos are found throughout. (about one per part).
page 8 "after lost mines II" for instance says "Laura will run to her house and the north out of town on the road." I assume that should read "near the north-end of town just off the road:"??