I was shocked at how good this is.. I really enjoy your work and feel like you've created the absolute perfect one shot to introduce people to D&D. I've been running games for nearly 20 years, and sure hope you've written other stuff.
Very easy to run, and a lot of fun. I ran this for 3 11 year olds and 1 8 year old and they loved it. Everyone was pretty new to D&D including myself with just a couple other play sessions under our belts. I think we may even build a campaign to follow up where the story leaves off.