Positive: I am so pleasantly surprised by this article! This new option for paladins lets them be open-minded and wise travelers, and it makes me want to roll-up a slightly grizzled ex-crusader type character. This article is well-researched, well-written, fun, and useful. Its 20th level power really surprised me!

Negative: Just a few proofreading errors. Some art would help this diamond in the rough pop, but I understand how it goes.

Overall: Wonderful! Will recomend to players and keep in mind for myself. An extra push into greatness would earn this title 5 stars.