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Monastic Tradition: Way of the Third Eye

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If you like Krillin, Tian, Master Roshi, etc., then this might be the Archetype for you!  Hit your foes with a flurry of force damage!  Erect a Tower of Iron Will!  Sense the presence of nearby creatures and determine if their bloodlust is directed at you or your allies!

If you're a traditionalist, then you can look no further for the true arts of the Zerths.  

There's a not too subtle Streetfighter reference in there too!

 
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Xavier L November 13, 2017 7:15 pm UTC
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A couple ideas for more Mental Disciplines. Not that the subclass needs them, but might be cool for a Jedi style monk:
* "Shield" as a psychic / spiritual defense.
* A ranged force push as a non-damaging action to round out the pull and levitate moves.
* "Friends" (as an alternate choice of starting cantrip) and "Suggestion" as a Jedi mind tricks. "Charm Person" and "Dominate Person" might work too, though they might also be off-theme or imbalanced, not sure.
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Xavier L November 09, 2017 5:45 pm UTC
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Cool set of abilities. Fills a niche nicely and seems well balanced too.

Maybe Overwhelming Blow should be worded like "Enemies perceive these blows as severe no matter how much damage they actually deal, and must succeed..." The way it's currently worded people might think the attacks always deal critical psychic damage regardless of how physically "superficial" the blows are.
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Xavier L November 09, 2017 6:05 pm UTC
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Also, some minor formatting and section naming suggestions to consider:

- Change the title of the document and the header on the second page to "Monastic Tradition: Way of the Third Eye" to make the name internally consistent and consistent with the other traditions.

- Make "Enlightenment" in the subtitle lower case for consistency with the other nouns.

- Rename the "Mental Disciplines" section to "Disciple of the Mind" and rename the "Disciplines" section to "Mental Disciplines" to mirror the section naming of the Way of the Four Elements.

- Make both subsections h4's (#### in markdown syntax) to match the equivalent headers in the PHB. Change the top header on the second page to an h3 (###) to match the equivalent headers in the PHB.

Anyway, these are all really minor suggestions. Great work overall.
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Matthew C November 11, 2017 10:04 am UTC
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Thanks for your comments and edit suggestions, I'll jump right on it after my next project is up!
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christopher L November 06, 2017 8:39 pm UTC
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Really awesome archetype. I can't wait to try it out.
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Matthew C November 07, 2017 4:25 am UTC
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Thank you for your comment! When you have a chance to try it out, please leave a review!
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