Vincent's Guide to Dwarves

Somehow, this file has replaced the free Barbarian class this author has also published. It's actually pretty good. it gives a plethora of good options for Dwarves. And the drinking/getting drunk rules are actually well thought out.

This looks intriguing, but at this price point, without anything to go on, this doesn't make the cut for me. I can't speak for others, but based on the quantity of content this appears to have, and the price point, I'd have to REALLY trust that it was amazing to shell out the dough. So here's a few suggestions: lower your price for a bit, let a few people buy and review it, then once you get enough traction, raise the price again. Or find some people online and give them eval copies and get them to review. You can also look for some popular online D&D bloggers & such and ask them to review, then post links to the reviews in here. You can also really flesh out the little bit of text you have on this. rather than just say that there's new monsters, list them. rather than just say "6 new archetypes" list them all out, and even put a short blurb on each one. Give potential buyers as much information as possible to make the decision to buy. You could also create a smaller version with only a tiny...See more sampling of the total content, and make that free, as a way to show people the quality of what they'll get. Like take 1 subrace, 1 of your archetypes, a couple feats, some of the new equipment, a couple spells, and a monster, and put that together in a free supplement. And then watermark it as a preview for this supplement.

Good luck!