Adventure - Shadows of Lineage

It may just be me, but I found the layout and set up of the module very confusing. By this I mean the way it was formatted and edited confused me and was not very straightforward.

I suggest always putting the levels (1 to 3 or 4) and number of players (4-5) in the DMsGuild description, since that's the 1st thing I look for when searching for modules.

I also suggest adding the published date (using the unambiguous yyyy-mm-dd format) as a footer to every page, along with the adventure name ("Shadows of lineage" or "Trouble in the troupe"?), so that if there are updates it's easy to see which downloaded-file/printed-page is which.

A print friendly version with no graphics, backgrounds, or frills would also be nice for people who don't like having electronic devices at the table.

Some typos I spotted, and copy edit suggestions:
Page 3, Background: swap paragraphs 3 and 4, "The boys mother" should be "The boy's mother", add Jaelle's name to paragraph 5, remove the extra full stop from paragraph 6.
Page 3, NPC background: "found away" should be "found a way", "surpress" should...See more be "suppress", "beleive" should be "believe", and consider combining the 2 sentences starting with "Those who" into 1 and putting the new-ways before the old-ways description.
Page 3, Services: order by cost from cheapest.
Page 3, The carnival: "youre typical" should be "your typical", "side show" should be "sideshow", "The Sword Swallower, the Giant Strong Man, the Woman who can morph to a Rat and more" could be clearer as "The Sword-swallower, the Woman-who-can-morph-into-a-rat, the Giant-strong-man, and more"

I really like the style of the quote text for act 1.