While better than the original, see my first post on the matter in the discussion tab. Things are more smoothly streamlined in the revision, but still some issues remain. Overall even with the changes, the module is still lackluster for a tier 3 adventure, and with a decently equipped party, this module is a simple dungeon crawl, with little substance or challenge. There is very little outside of the magical darkness in this module that will challenge a balanced party in this tier, as even one bad save on the final big bad ends this fight can end this fight before it begins, and as a result makes the four hours that go, make you ask yourself - are we there yet?