The archetypes provide interesting potential, however the wording of many of the spells and features used are unprofessional and unpolished. An example is the constant use of refering to a creature as her. For example on page 3, the level 14 feature for the Circle of Hags: "Whenever you slay a creature, you gain temporary hit points equal to her Charisma score". There are also several typos scattered throughout the document.

The subclasses themselves provide interesting options and considerations to be made for flavour, but they do sometimes feel unreflective of the message that the subclass is trying to present.

If you would like further feedback or proofreading, please reach out to me.