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For most, battle is a serious thing, a struggle of wits or weapons between opposing sides. For bards of the College of Sway, however, it is a dance, a synchronization of movement.

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Bryan H April 17, 2018 7:34 pm UTC
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Just a few notes:

1. You don't have the legal block required by all content creators. You should fix that to protect yourself.

2. Your formatting is weird. The top block is super wide, and everything else is in a two column format.

3. The style of writing (Cha cha Real Smooth and Do-Si-Do specifically) is off putting. It feels more like a meme reference than a real name for the abilities.

So that's the negative. On the positive side of things, thematically it works really well. Gaining unarmed attacks, using dancing as a focus... the theme ties everything together really well.
I will note there's a lot of repetition going on here. Cha Cha and Do-Si-Do both allow you to expend a bardic inspiration die, one adding to your AC and the other lowering your foes attack. I'll note given their duration, Cha Cha is much better than Do-Si-Do and that's not common for bard archetypes.

Other than that, it seems pretty solid. You should probably note if...See more
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Callista W April 17, 2018 8:12 pm UTC
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Thank you! I fixed some of the formatting, and added the legal content I forgot, so thank you for reminding me of that. The names were sort of meant to be playful, but I'll think about possibly changing them if I think of something that fits better. I do know what you mean about the repetition, I was a bit concerned about it also, but I think that with the limit of all the things you can do with Bardic Inspiration, that hopefully it deters players from abusing it too much. Still working on getting to playtest it, so I appreciate the comments :)
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